(oo) Rat On The Moon Poem by Rafique Farooqi

(oo) Rat On The Moon

Rating: 5.0


t is wild chilled outside,
through foggy window,
i can see still,
snow to yonder through,
frozen white oaks,
glittering in moonlight,
and with silence of night,
and fragile crystallised love,
and grey spotlight on my tail,
touching down, silk fur,
my pink lips and,
delicate nose tip,
and small white ivory teeths,
and sharp hunting, claw,
winged chariot coming,
to me in glories,
me for warmth of journey to,
brightened moon,
and looked so beautiful,
bright and blue-chip green,
i never ever seen,
and moon soft and plumped,
white mouse with pink tail,
jumping high amazing delight,
i was also to jump higher,
feeling light,
little resisting baby,
drifting gently from my throat,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 22 September 2009

A UNIQUE BEAUTIFUL LOVELY POEM..LOVED IT...

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Saadat Tahir 22 September 2009

the imagery is absolutely phenomenal... u bring up images from another land and time absolutely awesome and with a tinge of sadnesss....loved it cheers and ten

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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