(*) Waiting Eyes Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur

(*) Waiting Eyes

Rating: 2.8
 


My waiting eyes,
chilled in clouds,
wandering above the,
frozen peaks of the mountains.,
where darkness at nights,
and brightness of snow at day,
blinds me,
and fears of frost bite,
blown whistles of furious winds,
are to push me to drift in death valley,
why i want to know your presence,
close to my mind,
where a warmth of life,
is with survival,
my limbs are grabbed by white bears,
and they want me,
to drag in their caves,
and these bears are happy,
to find some taste of red blood,
i want finally to know a reality,
do you love,
to see me at this particular moment,
when i am to find asylum at heavens.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 31 March 2010

i want finally to know a reality excellent poem 10/10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2009

i want finally to know a reality, do you love, to see me at this particular moment, when i am to find asylum at heavens..beautiful poem and must beheard across or reach to the heart...i really was touched by its contents... i liked at any way....10 best one i must say.......read mine...mary to marry....anywhere...come home...home bound...no separate ways

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 02 September 2009

'...why i want to know your presence, close to my mind, where a warmth of life, is with survival, ...' Rightly said by Poet Survival thru LOVE Ten dr. sakti

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 August 2009

Why seek assylum when you can seek those lovely natures to redeem your disintergration with love.Well written piece Rafique.

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

interesting poem with fine imagery and great poetic language..........Thanks!

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Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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