Open Beams. Poem by Shelley L Baxter

Open Beams.

Rating: 5.0


I want open beams in the ceiling of my mind
plenty of lights, lots of space,
maybe a shadow or two inside.
There I can swing from rung to rung
from beams of hope and of pain.
Boards of love and of loss,
fully visible each memory clear.
None of my lived days lost,
a life not lived in vain.
An open mind like a parachute,
Sky’s the limit of all earthly houses.
A ceiling that I the owner can point and show,
all because it is a life fully lived.
All comings and goings noted;
all memories reside within
the walls of my mind.

Written April 6th 2005.

Tuesday, April 24, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: april,loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 25 January 2008

Geoff is right the imagry is fantastic, taking one to higher limits. I love the partial line 'ceiling of my mind'. Fabulous Shelley, nothing surprises me with you anymore, you are truly an excellent writer, I'm so happy you're my friend. Melvina

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Geoff Warden 24 April 2007

Wow.........Building piece by peice.....imagery is very well placed 10/10

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