((One)) What Do I Say To You? Poem by Shelley L Baxter

((One)) What Do I Say To You?

Rating: 2.8

Lord, I don't know
what to say...
what to do...
or what to pray.
Still, Lord I am
on my knees...
hands clasped...
eyes shut...
Praying anyway.

written March 26 2008

Rob Lamberton 12 November 2022

What can we say…thank you!

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Earl Fairbairn 07 July 2008

Hi Shelley, i liked your poem for what little i saw of it, it does after all leave the reviewer perhaps wondering what this poem is about, what i mean is what were you feeling or going through when you wrote this poem? Don't get me wrong some poets just write a poem without any effort or thought, i guess i like to divulge and inquire more on the poem its self because a poem written with emotion or intent is always more powerful.I liked your choice of words and thought that your arrangement was good as well, keep up the good work.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 April 2008

shelly..........you're distinctive when it comes to believing and hoping........i'll pray for your prosperity...........and longevity...............

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Jona Polo-Ramirez 05 April 2008

Hi Shelley, Short and profound.A prayer in a thousand more years! ! Thanks for your poetry.It really touched my heart. Thank you too for reading mine. Take care, Jona

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 March 2008

Lord yet knows what to bestow upon by the prayer, beautiful poem when lucid, a rarest among the rare, i love it,10/10, thanks for sharing

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