Open Wounds Poem by Daniel Brick

Open Wounds

Rating: 5.0


... Since wound there must be.
Robert Browning

You have to be really cautious now.
Any moment can be the Turning of Time:
a sudden shift, a twist in less than
a second and you will lose your balance,
and fall for days and nights, helplessly,
past past events, which like lost souls
stretch out their arms toward you.
The past must be completed, if not
in its own time, then in ours. It is
a layer of skin you cannot shed
the way the immortal snake sheds
its discarded lives one after another.
You are simply a mortal human,
and must carry your pasts with you forever.

Then another shift happens without warning,
and you're falling again, past possible
parallel futures: an infinite number
of them flash before you, some perhaps
derived from yesterday, or even earlier
today, but most dragged up from LIMBO.
They come to a restless rest
in the open wound of this present moment
we occupy. Make your choice, or one will
be made for you. Do not fear this event
you must resolve, for whatever choice
you make will be benign and help
to heal the open wounds of Time.
We are creatures of a perpetual convalescence.

Friday, April 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,healing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 03 May 2017

A wonderful philosophical write that probes time in its constant flux and the limitations of humans. True that a mortal human cannot detach himself from his past ever. And we must make a choice if we want to heal. Future though unknown always carries a probability of healing n better times. Through the time frame of our mortal existence, we are always going through hurt n healing alternately. A profound work that captures the dilemma of a mortal life so well but at the same time giving a message of hope....yes, we do recover from the wounds. A super 10.

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 April 2017

What a poetic lines! You are simply a mortal human, and must carry your pasts with you forever.Thanks for sharing here.

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