Orderly Life Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Orderly Life

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Is it thanks giving?
For all the time mistaking
And then gong to almighty
And seeking mercy

Why not you change first?
And go to last
For seeking further grace
With honest smile on face

It is simple way and thought
Live peacefully and never be caught
At any level for creation of back spot
The life for pleasure is never sought

God needs no explanation
Only good conduct in relation
Behave humanly and seek blessings
You shall never go missing

He is there to look after all
Just respond to sacred call
Trouble no one and pray sincerely
Your life shall always be an orderly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 December 2014

Behave humanly and seek blessings Real thanksgiving is just so. Nice message, Sir.

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Valsa George 07 December 2014

A very beautiful message! Each time after commiting sins, there is no point in seeking Heaven's mercy! Once we decide finally that we will make our life orderly, God will take care of us! The greatest principle in life is never trouble anyone and love all..... Definitely our life will become peaceful! A great poem Hasmukh ji!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 06 December 2014

God needs no explanation Only good conduct in relation. Living simple life and hoping towards the best achievement is well taught in essence of this poem. Faith on discipline makes the life more orderly. Nicely penned poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2014

Is it thanks giving? For all the time mistaking

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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