Stevie Taite

Rookie - 318 Points (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

Our Craft (Haiku) - Poem by Stevie Taite

Eloquently done
Your form you shape with chisel
Chisel of the mind

My eyes caress it
Feel filed contours of stanza
Such pleasing artwork

Bag of ideas put to work
New shapes will take form
today


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I had a full on poem of metaphors connecting different forms of art and poetry. But they slipped away in the night! Sometimes sleep is more important. This Haiku is all that remains of my ideas!

Comments about Our Craft (Haiku) by Stevie Taite

  • Aqeb BenazirAqeb Benazir (10/18/2012 5:21:00 PM)

    neat figures of speech; D well depicted. (Report)Reply

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  • Kelvin OwusuKelvin Owusu (10/11/2012 6:30:00 AM)

    this is not bad piece nicely written (Report)Reply

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  • Stevie TaiteStevie Taite (10/11/2012 12:30:00 AM)

    Oh. I need to research this form then... I can always edit this one if my sleepy ideas decide to return. The one I was writing in my head when I was too sleepy to move was rhyming and everything, not originally destined to be a haiku. But sadly it passed away: '0( (Report)Reply

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  • Valerie DohrenValerie Dohren (10/10/2012 3:01:00 PM)

    I keep a notepad by my bedside and often jot ideas down, but sometimes sleep comes first and they are forgotten in the morning. Love this little write, great ideation.. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 10, 2012


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