Our Daughters Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Our Daughters

Rating: 4.9


Their tears tear us apart
Their giggles have cheered us
Right from start.

Their victories over us
In the game of words
The flights of their fancy
Beat the birds

The dream filled eyes;
Make us think
While;
An eternity passes;
In their naughty blink

Layers of dreams and
Competitive priorities
Mock fights and feigned adversaries
Blackmails and many an innocent cheat
They know for them
Our hearts beat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 30 June 2009

certainly they know our heart beats........ fantastic write...........

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Sandra Fowler 30 June 2009

A delightful word picture of your daughters. Ten for them and ten for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Seema Aarella 30 June 2009

A warm poem.....i felt like i just placed my hand in my fathers hand, and felt the warmth of love and security!

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This is so beautifully expressed Nikunj. I can just see them giggling and getting up to mischief. A delightful poem from a very proud father. 10 love Karin

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 11 August 2009

Lovely poem.Daughters are always adorable, they always remains close to our heart.My love to ur daughter! ! 10.

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Indira Babbellapati 08 July 2009

daughter do make homes bright...

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Anjali Sinha 06 July 2009

lovely your daughters must be adorable and intelligent like you ofcourse they know 'our heart beats'--- good write -10 anjali

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Danny H 30 June 2009

This was ex tremely beautiful, a fathers words are stronger than what he thinks. make sure you let your girls know how much you care, words are stronger than possesions and money

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