Our Goal Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Our Goal

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It is river in spate
That tries to relate
Her mental state
By madly rushing straight

She has no control
Wants to respond to call
To see the sea is only aim
She is hitting banks with no shame

Destruction is seen everywhere
Is the prize so severe?
For meeting lover
I have no answer

The sea smiles at mad adventure
The hands are open to incur
Any wrath that she may want to inflict
With final calm or irate act

What a journey to take with
Totally hostile and armed with teeth
She is back home with great pleasure
Let us meet our goal and ensure

Monday, December 15, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2014

It is river in spate That tries to relate

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2022

Destruction is seen everywhere....this is the truth dear poet

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2014

That was great too! 15 Dec by Chloe Brink to Our goal

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Sina Farajzadeh 16 December 2014

I read your poem. What's the relationship of us for our goal? To meet in the vast ocean? To join after death?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2014

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Savita Tyagi 15 December 2014

Very nice poem. So well written. Nature is always the ultimate teacher.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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