Our Sanity... Poem by Annette Aitken

Our Sanity...

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Our Sanity

Eyes,
are the windows to the soul.
To open our eyes, and look truly inwards.
Would we like what we see?
Would it make us struggle
for our own survival, or,
simply,
close our eyes and refuse to see,
all the hurt, the pain,
that's buried deep within.
When all is said and done,
it is,
the inner battles that we need to win.
For we can all suffer from,
temporary insanity or
a delusional mind.
With every slamming of a door,
a new one opens in silence.
Takes us by the hand, leading us,
to a more peaceful place.

Our Sanity

by
A.A.17

Saturday, February 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: mental illness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the mind can be a very powerful organ.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 21 February 2017

Mental health is fragile and it can overcome us with frightening results, but in the silence of mental illness there is hope, love and peace waiting for us to embrace. Beautiful, insightful write!

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Clarence Prince 13 February 2017

Truly, the inner battle is one to win, but it's not easy without Jesus the comforter!

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Christopher Tye 13 February 2017

A really moving poem and so well formed and written. For many of use our mind's are our greatest gift and our greatest enemy.

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Hans Vr 11 February 2017

A poem filled with truth and wisdom. Looking inside, while it can be sometimes disturbing, it can be also a fabulous thing. When I look inside I find a mind that is busy, pleasing my ego, thinking thoughts of hatred and thoughts of love. Then when looking a bit deeper I find my heart sometimes obeying the mind, sometimes commanding it, sometimes full of pain and hurt and at other times love and compassion. If I manage to look beyond, I find the soul, the commander who can choose to use the mind in a different way. My soul speaks so softly and it has to be so quiet for me to hear it. I have to make it quiet, in my house, in my mind and also in my heart. But if I manage to hear its voice, it shows me the beauty all around me and directs my eye to the love in my heart and the smiles of the people. Life is not easy, but if we can manage to make it truly quiet in our mind and heart, the beauty is never far away. Sorry for the long comment. It is truly a thought provoking and wonderful poem.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 11 February 2017

...the inner battles that we need to win. Good poem! sylva.

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