Over Smart Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Over Smart

Rating: 5.0


You come out on the road with a veil on your face,
You naughty beloved I can feel your grace!
Sometimes it's brown, sometimes it's black,
Sometimes it's dense, sometimes with a crack,
The veil is often removed by the winds,
Perhaps the veil is reproved by the winds,
I like a moon's glimpse in the clouds,
I enjoy and approve fare sex of shrouds,
What do you think of me? Is it eyes that see?
Is it hands that touch? It's me only me!
You shy sweetheart I love you so much,
I am aesthetic with a poet's clutch,
All my senses are confined in my heart,
Is it your magic or is it your art?
In a pink rose bud I see you smiling,
On the blue skies see you profiling,
I know it's you in the scenery of earth,
The virgin is hidden in the greenery of earth,
In the rains I have seen your nude striping,
Well done my love I love your wiping,
When heart turns in eyes and you remove the dust,
And then your veil is removed as a crust,
My heart then turns in the thirsty lips,
Drops by drops and sips by sips,
Yes, my heart can kiss you sweetheart,
I have seen your art now you see my art!
I am proud I love a living sweetheart,
I am proud of me being over smart!

(Nature you cannot hide you in a veil, I am over smart)

Over Smart
Sunday, January 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalid Saifullah 25 January 2015

An amazing and stylish description of nature's appeals.....................10

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Valsa George 25 January 2015

Very romantic and sweepingly passionate! ' I like a moon's glimpse in the clouds'........ A very suggestive picture! Enjoyed much!

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Salini Nair 03 February 2015

I am proud I love a living sweetheart, I am proud of me being over smart! nice...like it

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Hazel Durham 27 January 2015

So original with amazing imagery written with a deep passion that shines with the sparkle of nature!

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 January 2015

A Fantastic flow of words. Beautiful romantic poem written with passion in heart..... Loved reading it.

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Sarmad Mirza 26 January 2015

An amazing poem just loved it......: -)

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Bisma Mirza 26 January 2015

Once again Amazing poem......... Great 10 on 10...

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