Overtaking Is Risky But Winning Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Overtaking Is Risky But Winning

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Travelling in same direction,
Taking turn after turn daily,
We drive smoothly and go,
Destination calls us to adore.

Highway is long journey is short,
Risky this is to overtake more,
But in competition we take risk,
To win life's degree we are eager.

Now I am going to overtake lorry,
I have increased my speed carefully,
Overtaking I shall reach soon,
But I am aware to see clear road.

Overtaking in turning we do not do,
Focusing light and blowing horn,
We request to another traveller,
While he gives side, we overtake.

Knowledge is art we need to learn,
Overtaking many in life's path,
We can arrive to our destination,
Carefully we should drive life.

Risky this is but winning we hope,
In competition we have to get ready,
With mutual friendship side by side,
Together we all can get wisdom.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,24 March 2017. All rights reserved.

Overtaking Is Risky But Winning
Friday, March 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: driving,journey,lifestyle
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2017

Overtaking! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Milan Panda 26 October 2020

Every person should drive vehicle carefully. Overtaking is of course risky. An amazing poem is shared.

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Biliiard Joseph 03 February 2020

Taking overtake is risky always. But a careful driver like can take this drive very beautifully stably. Thank you sir.

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Robert Murray Smith 30 June 2018

Eating up the highway is dangerous at all times.++10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 March 2017

Such a nice poem, Kumarmani ji. Life is a journey and we are all competing with each other. And sometimes, trying to overtake too, which is a risky proposition. It is not just traffic alone but in all walks of life. Dear Sir, a full 100 for you.

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Susan Williams 24 March 2017

Awesome! ! ! Now whenever we are traveling and my husband is wanting to pass someone ahead of us, I shall remember this poem and remind him of this verse: Knowledge is art we need to learn, Overtaking many in life's path, We can arrive to our destination, Carefully we should drive life. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Excellent advise for all kinds of life situations! 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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