Pain Poem by Ina Davila

Pain

Rating: 5.0


Take the pain i give
Take the pain i live
The blood runs down these old walls
Everything you know and love just falls
Falls and dies faster thatn a bullet to the brain
No time left for it to strain
As i lay here in the burning home
I say i feel so alone
A tear falls down my face
It drips off with such disgrace
This day of mine ends so i cant deal with the pain
It wont be me telling you this story again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 14 November 2008

Painful! written beautifully! ......10+++

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Billy Joe Collins 14 November 2008

good poem thanks for sharing

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