Pain Within Poem by Jennifer Cook

Pain Within

Rating: 4.5


There is a pain within this heart,
My pain within my sadness through my eyes,
My eyes are like a burden that you can see right through me,
No pain I ever felt was that one single broken heart that had been left behind and never got a chance to be healed,
There is way out of this pain but somehow I can’t see it,
See the light, the hope, the happiness I once wanted to feel,
Now I ever feel is this sadness, this pain, this heartache,
A pain within these wall I can hear it say,
There is no way out,
No way to wash away the pain,
The pain I feel.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebeca Valenzuela 04 February 2007

WOW! Excellent and well written poem.

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Ruhffa Ruhffa 18 May 2015

beautifullly written, ...

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2016

No pain I ever felt was that one single broken heart that had been left behind and never got a chance to be healed Excellent poem. But to say at the end there is no way out..... can lead to more pain and suffering. there is always a way out. thank you very much. tony

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Sydney Daniels 28 February 2006

Entralling, intense and cleansing. Good job.

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Rajudora 07 October 2018

Great poeam

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Brenda breunig 12 May 2018

Healing

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Hannah Williams 05 May 2018

great poem, i felt bthe pain as i read it.

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Rey G. Navarro 13 February 2018

Only the person with this kind of pain can express what Jennifer feels inside her. No one else can understand her as it is something unique to her.

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Jt 02 August 2021

I could relate though. Pain is something everyone wants to heal.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 22 October 2017

A heart touching poetic feelings.I loved every line.Deserves 10+++ Thanks for sharing.

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