Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 391 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Pain Within

Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

There is a pain within this heart,
My pain within my sadness through my eyes,
My eyes are like a burden that you can see right through me,
No pain I ever felt was that one single broken heart that had been left behind and never got a chance to be healed,
There is way out of this pain but somehow I can’t see it,
See the light, the hope, the happiness I once wanted to feel,
Now I ever feel is this sadness, this pain, this heartache,
A pain within these wall I can hear it say,
There is no way out,
No way to wash away the pain,
The pain I feel.


Comments about Pain Within by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Rajudora (10/7/2018 11:57:00 PM)

    Great poeam(Report)Reply

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  • Brenda breunig (5/12/2018 8:04:00 PM)

    Healing(Report)Reply

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  • Hannah Williams (5/5/2018 9:10:00 PM)

    great poem, i felt bthe pain as i read it.(Report)Reply

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  • Rey G. Navarro (2/13/2018 12:05:00 PM)

    Only the person with this kind of pain can express what Jennifer feels inside her. No one else can understand her as it is something unique to her.(Report)Reply

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  • Binayakumar MohantyBinayakumar Mohanty (10/22/2017 2:22:00 AM)

    A heart touching poetic feelings.I loved every line.Deserves 10+++
    Thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (10/5/2017 1:46:00 PM)

    Sadness through my eyes! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.(Report)Reply

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (10/5/2017 11:59:00 AM)

    A touching poem that expresses the intensity of pain.(Report)Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (10/5/2017 9:16:00 AM)

    The intensity of suffering caused by the pain is touching. However, time will definitely teach to overcome/live with it. Hearty congrats on poem of the day.(Report)Reply

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (10/5/2017 8:19:00 AM)

    The pain is also in your words. The thought of it never going away is the heartache. Yet really we know that it is sometimes often short lived. Yet seems unbearable at the time.
    May your pain now be washed away.(Report)Reply

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (10/5/2017 6:12:00 AM)

    pain within these wall I can hear it say,
    There is no way out,
    No way to wash away the pain,
    The pain I feel.

    A great write. Pain beyond escape, well described.
    10++,
    Congratulations for POD.(Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/5/2017 5:10:00 AM)

    Pain which remains within heart scribbles mind and this makes a person cry. The deep sadness provokes mind. There is no way to become out. Pain you feel is deep and this is difficult to remove. Still we wish you all the best to get recovery from pain reaming in memory of God. A brilliant sad poem is shared here...10..Congratulations! This is wonderful poem selected for the poem of the day.(Report)Reply

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  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (10/5/2017 4:46:00 AM)

    There is no way Out
    No way to wash away the pain... Excellent poem.. Congratulations(Report)Reply

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  • Jeanette TelusmaJeanette Telusma (10/5/2017 4:43:00 AM)

    A wonderfully expressed write for such a sad poem. Jennifer, congrats for being chosen and also for being a fine poet. Blessings to you always.(Report)Reply

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  • Tom Allport (10/5/2017 4:29:00 AM)

    a sad poem of true heartache felt during a spell of emotional breakdown? but always remember JR time is a great healer! .................well written(Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (10/5/2017 1:38:00 AM)

    Such a remarkable write, Jennifer...Congrats for being chosen... a perfect 10++++++(Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (10/5/2017 1:00:00 AM)

    There is way out of this pain but somehow I can’t see it,
    Great poem, congrats.(Report)Reply

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  • Loppo LouieLoppo Louie (2/22/2017 2:55:00 PM)

    An excellente poem by you..(Report)Reply

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  • Brian Ely (11/6/2016 2:57:00 PM)

    i can totally relate to those words. they spoke to me.(Report)Reply

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  • Hebert Logerie Sr.Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/29/2016 7:19:00 AM)

    Pain is the saddest part of life. We were born in pain. Pain is what we caused to our fellow men and women. Pain brings sadness; it is sad being in pain, although living is being in pain. However, sometimes this pain I benign; we do not feel it.(Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (3/27/2016 12:02:00 PM)

    No pain I ever felt was that one single broken heart that had been left behind and never got a chance to be healed
    Excellent poem. But to say at the end there is no way out..... can lead to more pain and suffering.
    there is always a way out. thank you very much. tony(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 28, 2006