Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 309 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.

Comments about Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Jefferson Carter (7/1/2017 3:56:00 PM)

    Jennifer, I like the concept here, but you rely on abstractions (reason, sadness, chance, life) so much the poem doesn't convince. Maybe read some good contemporary poets (Mary Oliver, Billy Collins) to see how inages can power a poem.

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    Tell me how you like it, and, if you do, perhaps share it with interested friends? Thanks! Yrs, JC
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  • (5/14/2017 4:10:00 PM)

    Vivid imagery. Strong emotional content. And a second chance. What a combo! Inspired me to write this:

    Returning Angel

    Angel falling
    Now from Heaven
    In total disgrace
    Forgiven ascends
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  • (5/14/2017 3:38:00 PM)

    What a rise after a great fall. I like the concept of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Ash Frost (4/13/2017 9:09:00 AM)

    life has a change experience (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2017 8:22:00 AM)

    It is a very different topic and well versed. (Report) Reply

  • Kaldorei Night (4/3/2017 4:15:00 AM)

    I could read this poem a million times, that's good poetry. (Report) Reply

  • (3/12/2017 8:38:00 AM)

    Marvelous (Report) Reply

  • Gerhardus Keen (2/24/2017 3:41:00 AM)

    Very nicely written. I think you already received your wings. (Report) Reply

  • Loppo Louie (2/11/2017 12:55:00 PM)

    Fallen Angel
    a fallen angel
    trying to gain its wings.
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  • Rajesh Thankappan (1/16/2017 9:14:00 AM)

    If we can recognize what had gone wrong and determine to resolve it, it is half the battle won. Loved the concept of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (1/8/2017 2:16:00 PM)

    tom allport
    a poem full of understanding of what to do if one falls down? it can happen to the best of us. (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (12/4/2016 7:27:00 AM)

    Fallen angel
    Born again to be more perfect.nice thought. (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2016 5:52:00 PM)

    We are all more or less fallen angels finding our way back to heaven. The poem could do with some grammar correction. (Report) Reply

  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/29/2016 7:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful Angels
    One thing that I like about angels is they are beautiful and free. Your fall was temporary. You will return in no time to your original self. You will rise again. Fallen Angel is very thoughtful poem. Best of luck. (Report) Reply

  • (10/16/2016 12:46:00 PM)

    I am the angel of sadness, Angel of lost hopes, Angel of lost dreams... Beautifully written. You have captured that feeling of sadness, the sense self forgiveness and ended with a feeling of redemption. Love it :) (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (9/30/2016 9:46:00 PM)

    This (fallen) angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her. Excellent expression. There is always a chance to make amends for the mistakes committed in the past. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Brenda Jensen (9/4/2016 12:26:00 PM)

    Jennifer such a lovely message (Report) Reply

  • Raiven Moore (8/24/2016 10:44:00 AM)

    I would say good for her and may she keep on keeping on (Report) Reply

  • Ans Maria Xavier (8/6/2016 7:50:00 AM)

    Good piece of art. Nice work, Ma'am (Report) Reply

  • Louis Borgo (8/5/2016 8:49:00 AM)

    Intriguing poem, Louis. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006

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