Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 391 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel

Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.


Comments about Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Sankhajit BhattacharjeeSankhajit Bhattacharjee (12/12/2019 1:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful in true sense. Full score.(Report)Reply

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  • Saravanan SivasubramanianSaravanan Sivasubramanian (12/9/2019 3:12:00 AM)

    Heart touching poem.thanks for sharing(Report)Reply

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  • Navod DilharaNavod Dilhara (11/30/2019 11:35:00 AM)

    An angel imploring to gain her life for the second time in order to rectify the mistakes she had made before. So exciting. Thanks for sharing!(Report)Reply

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  • Sankhajit BhattacharjeeSankhajit Bhattacharjee (10/18/2019 2:19:00 AM)

    Awesome
    thanks for sharing
    10+(Report)Reply

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  • Sarah (9/18/2019 5:29:00 PM)

    Awesome(Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (5/23/2019 5:23:00 AM)

    the fallen Angel
    came and knew
    the everything
    with insightful heart(Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (3/24/2019 9:53:00 PM)

    An angel who has fallen from sky and established on ground with dignity is an amazing angel.This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before. She is very right in action and attitudes. This poem is brilliantly penned.10(Report)Reply

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  • Oluwatosin ThomasOluwatosin Thomas (3/20/2019 3:27:00 AM)

    Interesting to the ears and well structured, powerful dictions. You've done a great job, cheers.(Report)Reply

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  • Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair(DPN) (9/21/2018 9:30:00 AM)

    We have stories in our mythologies about angels pushed out from the heaven for mistakes. Be cautious not to commit any mistake ahead. To apologise is divine. Read my poems please. Thanks(Report)Reply

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  • Brenda breunig (5/12/2018 8:02:00 PM)

    Angles(Report)Reply

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  • Narayanan Kutty PozhathNarayanan Kutty Pozhath (5/5/2018 2:17:00 AM)

    Very beautiful words of fallen angel. Good poem.(Report)Reply

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  • Unnikrishnan E S (4/24/2018 9:47:00 AM)

    Hi Jennifer,
    A second chance in life!
    And the resolve that one won't make the same mistakes she made before: : Would help her in that endeavour. Lovely poem.
    After a catastrophe, that is what we should work on. And(Report)Reply

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  • Magadha RaniMagadha Rani (2/23/2018 3:09:00 AM)

    I have fallen from sky,
    Fallen to the ground,
    I am the angel of sadness,
    Angel of lost hopes,
    Angel of lost dreams-Beautiful poem-thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (2/10/2018 2:47:00 AM)

    I am here for reason,
    That reason is to have a second chance in life,
    That life I was given for a reason,
    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel, a very fine poem dear poetess. thank you very much. tony(Report)Reply

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  • Carrie BennettCarrie Bennett (12/13/2017 2:06:00 PM)

    Beautifully written.Please check out my poems Daddy, Just To Let You Know and How many times.(Report)Reply

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  • Jesking AmuJesking Amu (11/26/2017 7:49:00 PM)

    beautiful piece, Jennifer, your poem strikes thoughts(Report)Reply

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  • Lungelo S MbuyaziLungelo S Mbuyazi (11/25/2017 4:43:00 AM)

    Ah! Fallen angel lives.

    Nice poet(Report)Reply

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  • Abhimanyu Kumar.sAbhimanyu Kumar.s (11/5/2017 10:00:00 PM)

    A nice depicted ballad of self. Have it with same feelings.thank you(Report)Reply

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  • Rajendra RoutRajendra Rout (9/26/2017 10:40:00 AM)

    I have fallen from sky,
    Fallen to the ground,
    I am the angel of sadness,
    Angel of lost hopes,
    Angel of lost dreams,
    I am the fallen angel,
    Fear me not,
    I am here for reason,
    That reason is to have a second
    chance in life,
    That life I was given for a reason,
    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,
    But that fallen angel had one chance
    in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same
    mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path
    that has been chosen for her,
    This fallen angel know what she has
    to do to be forgiven.i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing...10++++y(Report)Reply

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  • Sasmita Rani NayakSasmita Rani Nayak (9/26/2017 1:40:00 AM)

    I am here for reason,
    That reason is to have a second chance in life,
    That life I was given for a reason,
    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,
    A beautiful poem, fallen angel.
    Thanks poet.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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