Jennifer Rondeau

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Fallen Angel - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.


Comments about Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Abhimanyu Kumar.s (11/5/2017 10:00:00 PM)


    A nice depicted ballad of self. Have it with same feelings.thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Rajendra Rout (9/26/2017 10:40:00 AM)


    I have fallen from sky,
    Fallen to the ground,
    I am the angel of sadness,
    Angel of lost hopes,
    Angel of lost dreams,
    I am the fallen angel,
    Fear me not,
    I am here for reason,
    That reason is to have a second
    chance in life,
    That life I was given for a reason,
    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,
    But that fallen angel had one chance
    in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same
    mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path
    that has been chosen for her,
    This fallen angel know what she has
    to do to be forgiven.i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing...10++++y
    (Report) Reply

  • Sasmita Rani Nayak (9/26/2017 1:40:00 AM)


    I am here for reason,
    That reason is to have a second chance in life,
    That life I was given for a reason,
    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,
    A beautiful poem, fallen angel.
    Thanks poet.
    (Report) Reply

  • Anuranjita Ghadei (9/25/2017 6:23:00 AM)


    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,

    Nicely penned lines of the lovely poem, thanks poet.
    10+
    (Report) Reply

  • Biswa Ranjan Nayak (9/23/2017 6:13:00 AM)


    It is a wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Soumya Ranjan Rout (9/22/2017 9:50:00 PM)


    It is a great thinking about angles so thank you poet (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Sahoo (9/4/2017 11:59:00 PM)


    But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
    This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.
    Nice one to read.10
    (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Sahoo (9/4/2017 11:44:00 PM)


    But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
    This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.
    Wow, beautiful poem.
    10+++
    (Report) Reply

  • Seema Devi Sharma (8/28/2017 12:11:00 PM)


    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,
    But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    What a nice poem!
    Thanks for sharing it.
    10.
    (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (8/24/2017 8:50:00 AM)


    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,
    But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her

    A rare piece of beautiful work. Keep it up please.
    10++ for it.
    Subhas
    (Report) Reply

  • Mohit Katyal (8/17/2017 12:34:00 PM)


    Keep it up.. Great work done on the topic (Report) Reply

  • Michael Hopkins (8/1/2017 8:00:00 AM)


    Rise up from your abyss may be the answer. (Report) Reply

  • Jefferson Carter (7/1/2017 3:56:00 PM)


    Jennifer, I like the concept here, but you rely on abstractions (reason, sadness, chance, life) so much the poem doesn't convince. Maybe read some good contemporary poets (Mary Oliver, Billy Collins) to see how inages can power a poem.

    If you have time, check out my new website:

    jeffersoncarterverse.com

    Tell me how you like it, and, if you do, perhaps share it with interested friends? Thanks! Yrs, JC
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/14/2017 4:10:00 PM)


    Vivid imagery. Strong emotional content. And a second chance. What a combo! Inspired me to write this:

    Returning Angel

    Angel falling
    Now from Heaven
    In total disgrace
    Forgiven ascends
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/14/2017 3:38:00 PM)


    What a rise after a great fall. I like the concept of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Ash Frost (4/13/2017 9:09:00 AM)


    life has a change experience (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2017 8:22:00 AM)


    It is a very different topic and well versed. (Report) Reply

  • Make Shift (4/3/2017 4:15:00 AM)


    I could read this poem a million times, that's good poetry. (Report) Reply

  • (3/12/2017 8:38:00 AM)


    Marvelous (Report) Reply

  • Gerhardus Keen (2/24/2017 3:41:00 AM)


    Very nicely written. I think you already received your wings. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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