Jennifer Rondeau

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Fallen Angel - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

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I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.


Comments about Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau

  • (2/24/2017 3:41:00 AM)


    Very nicely written. I think you already received your wings. (Report) Reply

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  • Loppo Louie (2/11/2017 12:55:00 PM)

    Fallen Angel
    a fallen angel
    trying to gain its wings.
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  • Rajesh Thankappan (1/16/2017 9:14:00 AM)


    If we can recognize what had gone wrong and determine to resolve it, it is half the battle won. Loved the concept of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (1/8/2017 2:16:00 PM)

    tom allport
    a poem full of understanding of what to do if one falls down? it can happen to the best of us. (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (12/4/2016 7:27:00 AM)

    Fallen angel
    Born again to be more perfect.nice thought. (Report) Reply

  • Judith Blatherwick (11/28/2016 4:14:00 AM)


    This is a lovely poem. It is full of sadness and acceptance of fate, yet ends with hope. (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2016 5:52:00 PM)


    We are all more or less fallen angels finding our way back to heaven. The poem could do with some grammar correction. (Report) Reply

  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/29/2016 7:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful Angels
    One thing that I like about angels is they are beautiful and free. Your fall was temporary. You will return in no time to your original self. You will rise again. Fallen Angel is very thoughtful poem. Best of luck. (Report) Reply

  • Sister Frances (10/16/2016 12:46:00 PM)


    I am the angel of sadness, Angel of lost hopes, Angel of lost dreams... Beautifully written. You have captured that feeling of sadness, the sense self forgiveness and ended with a feeling of redemption. Love it :) (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (9/30/2016 9:46:00 PM)


    This (fallen) angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her. Excellent expression. There is always a chance to make amends for the mistakes committed in the past. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Brenda Jensen (9/4/2016 12:26:00 PM)


    Jennifer such a lovely message (Report) Reply

  • Raiven Moore (8/24/2016 10:44:00 AM)


    I would say good for her and may she keep on keeping on (Report) Reply

  • Ans Maria Xavier (8/6/2016 7:50:00 AM)


    Good piece of art. Nice work, Ma'am (Report) Reply

  • Louis Borgo (8/5/2016 8:49:00 AM)


    Intriguing poem, Louis. (Report) Reply

  • Chandan Sarkar (8/4/2016 3:50:00 AM)


    Brilliant writing
    ...u r really an àngel
    (Report) Reply

  • Anitah Muwanguzi (7/31/2016 11:58:00 PM)


    This is great- to not allow for others to determine tour fate but to fight to forge your own way. (Report) Reply

  • Khaled Ehtesham (7/17/2016 3:40:00 AM)


    i dont know you are from where? but your thoughts are excellent...really its a pleasure to read your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Chandan Sarkar (6/26/2016 2:59:00 AM)


    Really unbelievable...you have indeed angelic quality. Few lines heart-touching. Never give up hope. (Report) Reply

  • Carlos Pérez (6/5/2016 3:59:00 AM)


    Wow, this poem is really good! Would you like to read one of mine? I'm sure you'd like it :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/5/2016 3:49:00 AM)


    such a beautiful poem it just touches my heart so completely because I was given a second chance the Angeles tried to. Get me but I held on and held on and I am still here... Thank God for that one..an. Way too have beautiful talent keep it up I give u a perfect 10 you should go check some of mine at Wendy k Tadday and I will do the. Same I am going to add you to my friends list k (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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