Fallen Angel Poem by Jennifer Cook

They took my wings, They took me apart made me human, I was the fallen angel, But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her A rare piece of beautiful work. Keep it up please. 10++ for it. Subhas

They took my wings, They took me apart made me human, I was the fallen angel, But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, What a nice poem! Thanks for sharing it. 10.

But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her, This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven. Nice one to read.10

But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her, This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven. Wow, beautiful poem. 10+++

This (fallen) angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her. Excellent expression. There is always a chance to make amends for the mistakes committed in the past. Thanks.

A poem of self-pity. Lacks depth and poetic quality

Beautiful in true sense. Full score.

Heart touching poem.thanks for sharing

An angel imploring to gain her life for the second time in order to rectify the mistakes she had made before. So exciting. Thanks for sharing!

Awesome thanks for sharing 10+