Fallen Angel Poem by Jennifer Cook

Fallen Angel

Rating: 4.1


I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won't make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.

Fallen Angel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 August 2017

They took my wings, They took me apart made me human, I was the fallen angel, But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her A rare piece of beautiful work. Keep it up please. 10++ for it. Subhas

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Seema Sharma Rimi 28 August 2017

They took my wings, They took me apart made me human, I was the fallen angel, But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, What a nice poem! Thanks for sharing it. 10.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 04 September 2017

But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her, This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven. Nice one to read.10

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Sanjukta Sahoo 04 September 2017

But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given, This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her, This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven. Wow, beautiful poem. 10+++

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Rajnish Manga 30 September 2016

This (fallen) angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her. Excellent expression. There is always a chance to make amends for the mistakes committed in the past. Thanks.

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A poem of self-pity. Lacks depth and poetic quality

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 12 December 2019

Beautiful in true sense. Full score.

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Saravanan Sivasubramanian 09 December 2019

Heart touching poem.thanks for sharing

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Navod Dilhara 30 November 2019

An angel imploring to gain her life for the second time in order to rectify the mistakes she had made before. So exciting. Thanks for sharing!

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 18 October 2019

Awesome thanks for sharing 10+

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