Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 391 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

10 Years From Now

Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

10 years from now will you remember me,
Will you hate me,
Or date me,
Or be late to my funeral,
I waited to long,
I kept on pushing you away,
Can you see the world in my eyes,
There is sadness between us,
I need something to tell me that you’ll be happy once more or I should be happy once more,
I never did try or you never try to get to know me,
There is forces cures in each world we are in,
We are so alone but different yet the same person we are,
10 years from now,
Will you know the truth about how I feel about you before its too late,
I lurk in the darkness,
Losing my path,
You need to face what you become towards me,
I need to face what I have become towards you,
We are different and I know that,
But 10 years from now will you marry me or still hate me.

Comments about 10 Years From Now by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Loppo LouieLoppo Louie (2/11/2017 12:57:00 PM)

    10 years from now
    I hope everything is fine.
    Health & happiness awaits us
    with good cheer....(Report)Reply

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  • Kinyua KaranjaKinyua Karanja (7/9/2015 5:00:00 AM)

    I can see the persona in many young people especially here at college asking this rhetoric question in their mind. Nice poem.(Report)Reply

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  • Barry A. LanierBarry A. Lanier (2/22/2009 2:40:00 PM)

    In your writing I can see my wn daughter with her realtionship of off and on with a guy she really loves...and yes in 10 years they'll be married or apart always wondering what if? great write(Report)Reply

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  • Don Mcwilliams (3/8/2008 8:38:00 AM)

    Very interesting, Jen. I like the tone, the musing on what will be.


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  • John Clark (4/22/2007 6:13:00 AM)

    Impressive, Jen. Good to see your perspective on the future.(Report)Reply

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  • Behar Rexhepi (2/28/2007 3:27:00 PM)

    astonished am i from ur poetry so just keep on goinf forward(Report)Reply

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  • Madly In Love (2/27/2007 7:46:00 PM)

    i kinda noe how u feel, good writing ur a real insperation(Report)Reply

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  • Rebeca Valenzuela (2/4/2007 1:48:00 PM)

    I really loved your poem.(Report)Reply

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  • Thomas Lopez (12/14/2006 12:56:00 AM)

    WOW.......i love that poem, it touch my heart.(Report)Reply

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  • Sam Finley (4/6/2006 8:35:00 PM)

    hmmmm interesting......right on its got you say you base your poem off your life so this must be whats going on very good keep it up [smiles](Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 5, 2006