Painful Parting Poem by Lawrence Hiung

Painful Parting

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The pain of parting may you never endure
May you never experience a siren's allure

A beggar I am; my love is profane
And I have endured a lot of pain

Being wretched and lonely I do not enjoy
Oh, how this pain I would like to destroy

But where should I go and what should I do?
I'm completely lost; I have no clue

My life is sad; there is no joy
This pain of mine may God destroy

If the pain of parting could feel my pain
It won't endure it; it would go insane

I have no hope; there is only despair
this pain, O God, was I born to bear?

So, Hafiz, I feel like a nightingale
Having lost his rose, who can only wail.

Sunday, April 22, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was composed by great mystic poet Hafiz, or real name Shamsuddin Mohamed lived in Shiraz, Persia, now called Iran. (1320 AD- 1381 AD)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 04 May 2012

Lawrence, this is beautifully written. It touched my heart deeply. I can feel the deep emotion of the words. I hope that Hafiz was able to find hope.

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