Paradise On Earth! Poem by V.Muthu Manickam

Paradise On Earth!

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The Sun shines as gold, down the west
Full moon is on the move, to rise in the east

When one gets to set,
The other begins to get

Birds are settling, into the nest
Courteous caress of the breeze, is the best!

Sky is colorfully painted
Many themes, this has hinted!

Stars are peeping up to glow
Passage of time, added to their flow!

Strained soul sets to solace
Stirred senses, suggests the romance!

I desire here, forever to stay
As the mind fails, words to say!

When the lap of my love is lent as berth,
This place becomes, a paradise on earth!


Above poem is adapted from the eBook “FIRE WITHOUT FIRE IS ETERNAL! AND OTHER POEMS ON HAPPY LOVE ” by Mr.V.Muthu manickam. Copyright is held by V.Muthu manickam.

Thursday, March 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An actual experience during a journey outside.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 16 April 2017

Amazing poem about the charm of nature unfolding itself at the fall of night. Lovely write. Thanks. Birds are settling, into the nest Courteous caress of the breeze, is the best!

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Vmuthu Manickam 16 April 2017

In such a place, in such a situation, the above was written, as seen and felt. Thanks to God for creating such environment on that enjoyable day! Thanks to you too Mr. Manga! More shall come, sure! !

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2015

Lovely piece of poetry beautifully brought forth in poetic diction. A well formed description of colourful onset of dusk filled with bliss. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Vmuthu Manickam 17 March 2015

Thank you very much. It shall inspire me.

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V.Muthu Manickam

V.Muthu Manickam

Peraiyur, Madurai District, India
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