Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 685,904 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Partially Honest - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Can anybody of us claim to be partially honest?
Are we trying our best in real earnest?
We claim to be sincere and nearly good,
You will find many living in world only for food,

So many of us love to lead life of dishonesty,
Every moment we die to show honesty,
So hollowness in our approach,
We need no specialization or coach,

We try to show what we are not,
Try to vitiate atmosphere and create a knot,
Nothing appeals us and we always rot,
Think we are cleaver and will never be caught,

I t is our human nature,
We don’t live in today but in future,
Not improving present but go for cure,
What we can gain is not for sure,

Lovely things doe not appeal,
Good ideas we out right repeal,
Never try to attempt for wounds to heal,
It is the exact time to work for real,

You may not go for complete honesty?
Keep soft corner and little bit mercy?
Feel for sentiments and not show pity,
Pardon small mistakes and not feel guilty,

It ultimately pays and happiness fill, .
Not immediate reward but good will,
Closeness in heart and hatred slowly kill,
Sure to succeed in mission without guilty feel


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  • Paresh Chakra (12/7/2018 4:25:00 AM)

    It is a very gorgeous poem........10++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (10/22/2009 10:21:00 PM)

    Can anybody of us claim to be partially honest?
    Are we trying our best in real earnest?
    We claim to be sincere and nearly good,
    You will find many living in world only for food
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  • (10/18/2009 11:56:00 AM)

    So many of us love to lead life of dishonesty,
    Every moment we die to show honesty,
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  • (10/18/2009 11:28:00 AM)

    So many of us love to lead life of dishonesty,
    Every moment we die to show honesty,
    So hollowness in our approach,
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  • (9/17/2009 10:20:00 PM)

    So many of us love to lead life of dishonesty,
    Every moment we die to show honesty,
    So hollowness in our approach,
    We need no specialization or coach
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  • (8/21/2009 6:34:00 AM)

    still it is ok for us....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/19/2009 6:28:00 AM)

    this i still acceptable....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/19/2009 6:19:00 AM)

    it is better than nothing....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/15/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    it is desirable too...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/12/2009 7:02:00 PM)

    it is somewht ok....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/10/2009 10:26:00 PM)

    some percentage should be ok for person....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/10/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    this is aceptable too...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/9/2009 8:31:00 AM)

    partial honesty is welcome....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/7/2009 10:04:00 AM)

    partial honesty is welcome....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2009 11:48:00 AM)

    partial also welcome step....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2009 11:28:00 AM)

    it is welcome step...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (7/26/2009 10:18:00 PM)

    Can anybody of us claim to be partially honest?
    Are still ok it is..10
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  • (7/26/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    Can anybody of us claim to be partially honest?
    Are we trying our best in real earnest?
    We claim to be sincere and nearly good,
    You will find many living in world only for food,
    ou can be partially honest...10
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  • (7/26/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    Can anybody of us claim to be partially honest?
    this can be claimed by many on this world...10
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  • (7/26/2009 7:39:00 AM)

    I continue to wonder and also enjoy,
    Always rejoice at home and not others annoy,
    Tease we always and ready to employ,
    welcome always, , , ,10
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 16, 2009



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