Sunday, December 25, 2005

Passage Comments

Rating: 4.3

There is a new beginning
At the moment we pass on -
A special understanding comes
When darkness turns to dawn;
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Linda Ori
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David Harris 24 March 2007

Linda, this is beautiful. It is short, but having said that, you have said so much with the few words that you've written. Great poem, really a great poem. Thank you so much for sharing it. Top marks from me. David

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Preeti - is here! 11 July 2006

wow....you sound liek a rpo...great work! ! Preeti

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Chuck Audette 19 April 2006

Have to agree with Dan T. This feels like a classic. -chuck

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Dan Tharp 26 February 2006

As I read this, it made me think of Emily Dickinson. Particularly the last 2 lines. Nice rhythm. dan

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Graham Jones 30 January 2006

Another lovely poem linda, giving hope to those who believe and have the faith: -))

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