Path Toward Salvation Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Path Toward Salvation

Rating: 5.0


You stay still
In our accumulating thoughts
And wipe out
Traces of darkness gathered.

You turn the feeling of insipidity
Into pleasant and tasty morsels
Life that turned into a dry stump
You let new leaves of hope grow.

As friendliness fades among us
You bring affinity into our hearts
In a world that doesn't care for others
You deliver a change to honor one and all.

You remove enmity that develops
And replace it with eternal love
You let devotion grow
And show us path toward salvation.

Saturday, December 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: devotion,prayer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 December 2020

God delivers a change to honor one and all. He removes enmity that develops and replaces it with eternal love. He shows us path toward salvation.. A beautiful devotional poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing. Full stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2020

A beautifully crafted prayer. Powerful lines and well conveyed.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 05 December 2020

Amen. We really need prayers to stop this world from self harm. We need love.

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