Friday, July 11, 2008

Patience Comments

Rating: 5.0

Patience has run out on me
No longer will I wait and see
The past has passed to let it be
Hope is what will become of me
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Tia Maria
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Ian Bowen 04 October 2008

Tia, well put together. Loved the line: 'The past has passed to let it be' 10/10 Ian

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blue 802 11 July 2008

You have no idea how good this piece is, nor how much pleasure it gave me to read it ' arnt I the smug one' 10/10

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Rema Prasanna 11 July 2008

A fine write on patience, hopes and future...past is an experince present a day's gift and future a colourful dream.. wish your roses bloom on a rosy future... 10 Rema

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David Threadgold 11 July 2008

patience, exploration and freedom a fine combination nicely put together.

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