Windows shut tight
my mind hollow,
sealed off from passer-by
though my soul was-
peace found its way
grumbling along its path to
where my heart resided...
grudgingly I left
my door ajar
as hope replaced
the numbness
that I was accustomed to
till today.
Write comment. Such a beautiful start, Ishara. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
A beautiful line spreads its wings all over the shades of this poem over the lane of reader's mind.. I left my door ajar as hope replaced the numbness that I was accustomed to till today. All 5 stars..and to my favourites list. Thanks dear poet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Really a concise motivational bit of verse nicely put together. A beautiful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.