Paving Its Way Poem by Ishara Parveen

Paving Its Way

Rating: 5.0


Windows shut tight
my mind hollow,
sealed off from passer-by
though my soul was-
peace found its way
grumbling along its path to
where my heart resided...
grudgingly I left
my door ajar
as hope replaced
the numbness
that I was accustomed to
till today.

Friday, October 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 December 2020

Really a concise motivational bit of verse nicely put together. A beautiful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 November 2020

Write comment. Such a beautiful start, Ishara. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2020

A beautiful line spreads its wings all over the shades of this poem over the lane of reader's mind.. I left my door ajar as hope replaced the numbness that I was accustomed to till today. All 5 stars..and to my favourites list. Thanks dear poet.

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Ishara Parveen 16 November 2020

Thank you very much sir for your appreciation.

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Ishara Parveen 16 November 2020

Thank you very much

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