Peace Poem by Ata Khan

kwl stlye of writing man, dats well set piece of poem, i lyk it, u gat my vote

wow nice poem............... i like it! !

that is so beautiful poem Ata, god bless you and bless this world unless the end is here. thanks for sharing 10++++++

AND this is the manifestation of emotion, i like particularly the ending points, the hope. well done.

Great poeam, can feell it, it's like what's happening today in the world. Take care & keep up the good work.

Beautiful. Peace - the one thing that is most needed in this world right now. May I suggest you to read another one written along similar lines? It's called 'Smudge of Blood' (I didn't write it) . I read it today and it made me cry.

divine thought...good choice of words... I liked it.

sad but very true poem. but i found that in this, if you rise above all adversity, you shall succeed in what you want.

A very sad but true poem, with glimmers of hope. Beautiful.

Very sad fact of observing the innocent lives being destroyed by the unnatural sources of destructive powers. Peace is a beautiful dream to actualise among all the hoplessness of events around the globe. thanks for sharing your thoughts.