Peachy Blossoms ….2501-2k12 Poem by saadat tahir

Peachy Blossoms ….2501-2k12

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Petals of peachy blossoms rub,
gentle caring silky soft.
A haven far from unkindly drub,
soul and spirit to take aloft.

Green tender shoots matched swing,
up and down slowly sway.
In the lullaby of breezes sing,
to each others care and company play.

Evergreen melody from Grecian isles.
Softly spread across downy glade.
Surges and plays across endless miles.
Pink and pure as wines accolade.

Matchless clustered Lesbo’s bays.
Harkens canoes to crashing waves.
Sisterly waters come in plays.
Sheltered sails from alien raves.

original
saadat tahir
25 Jan,2k12
Islamabad.

http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=cQ5VlOl6tj4

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 17 January 2017

What a magical haven you have created! Lovely ambiance with peachy blossoms gently rubbing, green tender shoots swaying in the wind, the melody spreading across downy glades and bays with sisterly waters! Love this highly rhyming poem!

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Saadat Tahir 17 January 2017

thanx valsaji..kind words blessings

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Angel Payne 28 December 2012

Sounds like a straight mans fantasy.... :)

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Saadat Tahir 17 January 2017

:) but if i may....are fantasies all bad....

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Wahab Abdul 10 February 2012

NICE, NICE VERY NICE, I LIKE POEM, NO, I SHOULD SAY I LOVE YOUR POEMS, YOU HAVE ALL THE POTENTIALITY TO BE A FAMOUS POET.

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