saadat tahir

Gold Star - 4,976 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

Peachy Blossoms ….2501-2k12 - Poem by saadat tahir

Petals of peachy blossoms rub,
gentle caring silky soft.
A haven far from unkindly drub,
soul and spirit to take aloft.

Green tender shoots matched swing,
up and down slowly sway.
In the lullaby of breezes sing,
to each others care and company play.

Evergreen melody from Grecian isles.
Softly spread across downy glade.
Surges and plays across endless miles.
Pink and pure as wines accolade.

Matchless clustered Lesbo’s bays.
Harkens canoes to crashing waves.
Sisterly waters come in plays.
Sheltered sails from alien raves.

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saadat tahir
25 Jan,2k12
Islamabad.

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Comments about Peachy Blossoms ….2501-2k12 by saadat tahir

  • Valsa George (1/17/2017 9:49:00 AM)


    What a magical haven you have created! Lovely ambiance with peachy blossoms gently rubbing, green tender shoots swaying in the wind, the melody spreading across downy glades and bays with sisterly waters! Love this highly rhyming poem! (Report) Reply

    Saadat Tahir Saadat Tahir (1/17/2017 9:52:00 AM)

    thanx valsaji..kind words
    blessings

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  • Angel Payne (12/28/2012 7:48:00 PM)


    Sounds like a straight mans fantasy.... :) (Report) Reply

    Saadat Tahir Saadat Tahir (1/17/2017 9:51:00 AM)

    :)
    but if i may....are fantasies all bad....

  • Wahab Abdul (2/10/2012 10:27:00 AM)


    NICE, NICE VERY NICE, I LIKE POEM, NO, I SHOULD SAY I LOVE YOUR POEMS, YOU HAVE ALL THE POTENTIALITY TO BE A FAMOUS POET. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 25, 2012



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