Love’s fade,
insipid glade.
labored heave,
flaccid peeve.
Wax precess.
Wane recess.
Dried sheaves.
Scattered leaves.
Stark glance,
looks askance.
Nebulous eyes.
Hidding lies,
Timeless tales.
Careworn wails.
(Islamabad)
good 'passion precession' words parade...gives a nice tasty insight...thanks...10
i already told you that you have a mastery over couplets...
sweet & smart poem, love keeps its momentums, and powers
To convey a message in rhyming is indeed difficult but you seem to master the art, very descriptive and creative write, Saadat!
lovely couplets each a masterpiece as always a tenner for you anjali
Wonderful rhythmic poem, short and terse like. Conical spin of a long cry exhausted in timeless tales of love and pain. Good couplets, Saadat. Regards Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very perceptive, Saadat. good observations Mamta