Jasmine Black


Pencil - Poem by Jasmine Black

The tool that lets me express myself
When I need it most
The tool that allows me to breathe
When it feels like I am drowning
The tool that helps me keep my sanity
When I feel like I'm losing it
The tool I would be lost without

Topic(s) of this poem: writing


Comments about Pencil by Jasmine Black

  • Chinedu Dike (12/14/2015 7:58:00 PM)


    Good train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely depiction of the therapeutic effects of writing, a beautiful tribute to the pencil. Thanks for sharing Jasmine. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Kim Barney (12/7/2015 11:22:00 AM)


    This is your best poem so far. I prefer to use a pen myself (see my poem O HOMEM DA CANETA [PEN MAN]) , but pencils are great tools and have the advantage of being able to be erased. When I make a mistake with my pen, I just cross it out and continue. I have tried erasable pens but never yet found one I liked.
    Keep writing, Jasmine.
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 1:37:00 AM)


    You are in good company (Report) Reply

  • (11/22/2015 7:36:00 PM)


    A beautiful tribute paid to pencil, a tool of poets expression. Gratitude displayed for the tool displays the sensitivity and tenderness of the poet. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Alice Perfect (11/22/2015 7:34:00 PM)


    Weed?

    LOL

    great to imagine
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    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 1:38:00 AM)

    Sometimes.: -)

  • Gajanan Mishra (11/22/2015 7:14:00 PM)


    good one, tool I would be lost without.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 22, 2015



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