Penciled Ponderings Poem by Harley White

Penciled Ponderings

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Midst photographs that ‘changed the world'
I spied the Nebula Pencil
with linear shape wooden burled
evoking writing utensil.

This filament cloud far-ranging
in Vela ‘Sails' constellation,
said the caption, showed ‘world changing'
since explosive star creation.

But as more pictures were perused
I grew disheartened with sadness
sinking into despair, bemused
by our species' ways of madness.

Diversified illustrations
of deeds historic or horrid
depicted human relations
shockingly callous to torrid.

My spirits plunged in grief profound
when I saw a starving child slumped
emaciated to the ground
where nearby vulture waited humped.

The awful vision held me tranced
in tragedy of that being
immortalized by shutter's glance
for future beholders' seeing.

Still by atrocity haunted
I turned my attention away
from those impressions that taunted
what flowery words I would say.

As tears welled up, I raised my gaze
to the firmament overhead
whelming myself in cosmic maze
where starry splendors round me spread.

An author's tool seemed apropos
for scripting sidereal piece
of an empyrean tableau,
granting troubles a brief surcease.

Pencils enjoy a cherished place
as symbol of creative muse.
Thus, finding one in outer space
was lyric task I had to choose.

Part of supernova shock wave,
NGC Two Seven Three Six
has remnants from the burst that gave
it wispy aspect to transfix

of a rippled gaseous sheet
that's undulating threadily
and from the blast's initial heat
has been cooling down steadily.

A picture's worth a thousand words
while the pen is mighty as well,
whether one minds the ‘rule of thirds'
or composes a villanelle.

As poets may versify thought,
photographs images capture.
Both arts our humanness have wrought
from deepest despair to rapture.

This glowing formation highlights,
in my view, an essential goal
I wish to keep within my sights—
to awaken the heart and soul.

The heavens enhance awareness
plus make us perceive our smallness,
perchance in grasping life's rareness
or sensing the utter allness.

We're lent this earth to wander on
through mortal lives whence home is based.
Wisdom abounds to ponder on
yet our surroundings we lay waste,

where trills the wondrous whippoorwill
from sunsets gold to coral dawns
and blushing lady's slippers still
enchant the afternoons of fauns.

How can good fortune's smile remain
on land and sea, o'er hill and dale,
when mankind loses touch humane,
with appetites beyond the pale?

Neither can I be reconciled
by mollifying phrases mild
to damage done in nature's wild,
nor evermore forget that child.

Penciled Ponderings
Thursday, November 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: astronomy ,compassion,earth,human condition,inspiration,nature,nebula,pencil,photographs,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"The Pencil Nebula: Remnants of an Exploded Star (NGC 2736) " with image (at Hubble site) for downloading…

Remnants from a star that exploded thousands of years ago created a celestial abstract portrait, as captured in this NASA Hubble Space Telescope image of the Pencil Nebula.

Officially known as NGC 2736, the Pencil Nebula is part of the huge Vela supernova remnant, located in the southern constellation Vela. Discovered by Sir John Herschel in the 1840s, the nebula's linear appearance triggered its popular name. The nebula's shape suggests that it is part of the supernova shock wave that recently encountered a region of dense gas. It is this interaction that causes the nebula to glow, appearing like a rippled sheet.

The Pencil Nebula was last in a series called 'LIFE [Magazine] 100 Photographs That Changed the World', for which info is here…

Information about the picture 'The vulture and the little girl' (not included in the LIFE series) ~ in Wikipedia article…

'The vulture and the little girl is a noted photograph by Kevin Carter which was sold to and appeared (for the first time) in The New York Times on 26 March 1993. It is a photograph of a frail famine-stricken girl collapsed in the foreground with a vulture eyeing her from nearby…'

L'après-midi d'un faune (or 'The Afternoon of a Faun') , final text published in 1876, is a poem by the French author Stéphane Mallarmé…

Inspiration also derived from 'The Prologue to Bertrand Russell's Autobiography' ~ 'What I Have Lived For'…

'Three passions, simple but overwhelmingly strong, have governed my life: the longing for love, the search for knowledge, and unbearable pity for the suffering of mankind. These passions, like great winds, have blown me hither and thither, in a wayward course, over a great ocean of anguish, reaching to the very verge of despair…'
~ Bertrand Russell

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Credits for the Pencil Nebula image:
NASA and The Hubble Heritage Team (STScI/AURA) :
Acknowledgment: W. Blair (JHU) and D. Malin (David Malin Images)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walkerjohn 21 July 2020

Aloha Harley and Cheers! I ponder many of the same and similar pictures... That child... that star nursery... and harbour many of the thoughts herein... and IAM just reading you? I enjoy the notes also... I must consider more profoundly how it is I read these selections... All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Harley White 23 July 2020

Images can be powerful and some are truly haunting. I'm pleased that you followed along on the 'journey' of this poems, as its twists and turns took you. How marvelous that you found my poetry and have been reading some of them! I am indeed grateful!

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Jette Blackstone 18 November 2017

Your poem is beautiful. Thank you for providing the footnotes about not only the Pencil nebula image, but also of the other more 'earthly' photographs. I love how a poet can take an image, write a poem about it, find the connections and the emotions that can pull the most seemingly disparate images together. I won't forget about that child nor that star. Thank you.

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Harley White 18 November 2017

The perceptiveness of your comment has moved me. I’m gratified that you responded so deeply to what I hoped to convey in this poem. I also appreciate that you took the time to read through the notes. Thanks very much.

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Bill Cantrell 12 November 2017

Heavenly celestial phenomenon, a muse bellowing out in penciled ponderings our sufferings, you tie many things in this one, very impressive to see your poetry and your armada of vehicles you choose to deliver, be it super nove, white star, Nebula or a song, it is always a journey to say the least

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Harley White 13 November 2017

I truly appreciate your attentiveness to my poems! Yes, there are many themes and extremes in this poem. What a wonderful comment you have made! Thank you so much!

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Harley White 09 November 2017

I had to delete the poem and post it again and unfortunately lost the comments. Sorry...

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