Pencils & Crayons Poem by anais vionet

Pencils & Crayons

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I drew stick figures
things were simple

in a pencil world
mistakes were erased
you could start over

but an inchmeal awareness nagged
- the sky isn't gray, it's a liquid blue

but crayons were complicated
you couldn't erase things
mistakes were irrevocable.

and there were 148 colors in the big box
keeping them in rainbow order was work.

growing up is hard

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Webster: Inchmeal: gradual, or little by little

Pencils & Crayons
Friday, June 16, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: challenges,humor,alliteration,growing up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Good reading

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anais vionet 28 June 2023

Thank you! I'm seeing comments for the first time this MONTH - it's exciting - thanks for commenting. I wasn't being rude.

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Kim Barney 17 June 2023

Is that really a current picture? You look too young to be in college, but you are beautiful!

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anais vionet 25 June 2023

Yep,2 months ago. Thanks =]

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David Wood 17 June 2023

Life is hard when yr young compared to 40-50 years ago, but you'll get there. You might have to change the crayons to watercolour or oil paint, but you can do it.

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