Phantom Poem by Sathya Narayana

Phantom

Rating: 5.0


One day I’ll become the Phantom
And enter your cozy room
To the winds, sans a hint
Skipping the Moon’s glint
And on your lips
I’ll impress
A kiss
Ishhh!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 15 October 2009

Sathya, It is beautiful...10... Tsira

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Carol Gall 15 October 2009

lovely i hope you get your wish 10

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Kesav Easwaran 16 October 2009

a phantom kiss i presume! nice...light-hearted...romantic...10

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Jyoti Saxena 26 October 2009

hi satya i marvel at yr ability to pour such intense passion in just a few lines-a feat possible by a poet of yr calibre only - sensatinal! !

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Jyoti Saxena 26 October 2009

hi satya i marvel at yr ability to pour such intense passion in just a few lines-a feat possible by a poet of yr calibre only - sensatinal! !

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 October 2009

Woww this is very passionate write.. I enjoyed every zip of this poem.. Short, but very nice to read10+++ cheers Shan

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Alf Hutchison 18 October 2009

Hi Sathya... this is real cloak and dagger stuff... enjoyed it my friend regards Alf

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Indira Babbellapati 16 October 2009

...wow! the problem is 20 characters which will definitely mar the response...

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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