Sunday, September 4, 2022

Pitter Patter Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Pitter patter morning rain,
Falling on my window pane,
Life just doesn't feel the same,
Longing to see you again.
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Jayne Louise Davies
rain Longing
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Jayne Louise Davies 06 September 2022

Thanks everyone x Your encouraging words mean a lot x

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Richard Wlodarski 05 September 2022

Almost sounds like a children's song with an touch. Very well done, Jayne!

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Nosheen Irfan 05 September 2022

Rain evokes mixed emotions in us. You feel both happy and sad. The magic effect of rain is beautifully captured in easy flow and rhythm!

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hERCULES lORENZO 04 September 2022

nICE rHYMES

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 September 2022

Today this poem seems right in Ontario Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 September 2022

Loved this rhythmic poem... Top score

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
Jayne Louise Davies
Jayne Louise Davies
Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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