Monday, April 11, 2005

Pizza In The Lunchroom Comments

Rating: 3.5

'Pizza in the lunchroom'
she said as she walked by
pizza in the lunchroom?
I had to go and try
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Chuck Audette
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John Fieldson 16 January 2009

This poem's got a great melody, I can hear some country singer playing it on the radio. I really enjoyed it

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Elysabeth Faslund 25 August 2007

Truth in a poem about pizza! Oh yeah, way funny, the satire on a deelish craving-gotta-have! No guilt anywhere in sight! Who needs guilt...that is for tomorrow! Go, Charles, go! ! ! xxxElysabeth

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Esther Leclerc 22 February 2006

Laughing at this again, but I can't choose a favorite line - still, I've got to mention 'and my stomach cursed my eye'! Oh, and 'eatza/pizza' AND 'enticing slicings'! TOO funny and who can't relate? ! 10 for making my stomach hurt - from vicarious over-stuffing - and larfing! ! !

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Poetry Hound 11 April 2005

This is pretty funny, Charles. The other good one was crashing a reception to get the free food. Just remember if you're ever in Washington - Republicans spend more and have better food at their receptions than Democrats - so crash the Republican receptions.

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Chuck Audette

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