Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Pizza-What A Treat Comments

Rating: 3.4

A slice of pizza is loved
By my whole family
It is the best and testiest snack
That ever there could be
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Lal Parameswar 09 May 2007

Just need to eat a pizza now! ! ! !

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David Harris 06 May 2007

Risha, I'm not a lover of Pizza myself, never got the taste for them. However this is a lovely little poems about them and your last line made me smile. Loved it. Thanks for sharing it Princess. Top marks from me. David

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Mary Das 04 May 2007

Good description of pizza. I love vegetarian pizza. Once in a while it should be okay.

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YUMMY! ! ! ! ! I love pizza 2 and that poem just made me hungry lol.

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Beach Glass 25 April 2007

Keep it up little one, you are writing some excellent poetry for one so young. Umm, now I'm hungry too! ** BL **

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Dr John Celes 25 April 2007

A Pizza, once in a way, is OK! Your Pizza poem was a very good theme for a budding, young poet. You can do some changes and make your pizza look really delicious, energising and attractive! At the moment, your pizza looks quite good Because, its made by your mother, as lovely as she could! Good work, Risha, Dr John Celes PS.Doctors don't recommend Pizzas!

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DAKOTA AUSTIN 25 April 2007

Risha, great poem......, But now I'm getting hungry for some PIZZA! Blessings, Dakota

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Cochin(India)
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