Pleasant Pain Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Pleasant Pain

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Pain dear
With you
I gain...

Experience
To face
Adversity.

I'm here
To take
World's pain...

In return
I hope
Some peace.

Your pain
You please
Give me...

In exchange
I give
You joy.

Painless life
No excitement
No fun...

Where there's
Pain
There's cure.

All sweets
Not always
Feel good...

Must be
Followed by
Saltine cracker.

Let limit
Of pain
Be bearable...

Let level
Of pain
Be pleasant.

Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2014

poet has the capacity to take the pain of the world and give peace to all, For others, a good sacrifice everything, I love it.

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Yash Shinde 03 April 2014

Painless life No excitement No fun... ........very true............some salt in life makes it lively and enjoyable.....

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Savita Tyagi 25 March 2014

Life is a mixed bag of candy and crackers. Loved the way poem is written.

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Kanav Justa 21 March 2014

All sweets Not always Feel good... Must be Followed by Saltine cracker. so true, , ,

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Ramesh Rai 19 March 2014

Tolerance of pain has no end. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Dinesan Madathil 19 March 2014

Wonderful human approach! I have never heard of a similar exchange offer from any poet here. A fine write with specific message sir.

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