Nice one.. I don't know much about haiku kind of poems.. But i know that the shorter the poem is the more careful you should be about the quality of the lines you choose to write. Cos the best has to be carved out from just those few lines.
Anyway, i like this haiku :)
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Nice one.. I don't know much about haiku kind of poems.. But i know that the shorter the poem is the more careful you should be about the quality of the lines you choose to write. Cos the best has to be carved out from just those few lines. Anyway, i like this haiku :)