if you do all that
lovemaking
whilst you two
are alive
see the comments would exceed
a beehive
you love her so much
never let her die
she will cry
ere you die
so live together
and see
who goes first
you or she
and
maybe if your love is so intense
you may both in a helicopter fly sky high
and drop dead holding hands
both will together enter
those unknown lands
as lovers alive
all will welcome
but don't die before me please
I'd love to hear some one crying
for me
but don't die before me please I'd love to hear some one crying for me.............. a true lover always thinks like this. An impressive poem.
A beautiful love poem. Tender feelings of love are expressed beautifully in this write. To think of lovers parted by death is a very sad thing. But i'm sure love goes beyond physical boundaries. The concept of eternal love pleases the heart.
kindness Nosheen Irfan how much lovely comments to poets do mean Thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice advice to stop in matured solution, thank you.