Please Don't Die Poem by me poet yeps poet

Please Don't Die

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if you do all that
lovemaking
whilst you two
are alive
see the comments would exceed
a beehive

you love her so much
never let her die
she will cry
ere you die

so live together
and see
who goes first
you or she
and
maybe if your love is so intense

you may both in a helicopter fly sky high
and drop dead holding hands
both will together enter
those unknown lands
as lovers alive

all will welcome

but don't die before me please

I'd love to hear some one crying
for me

Wednesday, January 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice advice to stop in matured solution, thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 February 2017

but don't die before me please I'd love to hear some one crying for me.............. a true lover always thinks like this. An impressive poem.

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Julie Smith 16 January 2017

A beautiful and honest poem, I can relate

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 January 2017

thanks Julie i see u have posted three will read

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Nosheen Irfan 10 January 2017

A beautiful love poem. Tender feelings of love are expressed beautifully in this write. To think of lovers parted by death is a very sad thing. But i'm sure love goes beyond physical boundaries. The concept of eternal love pleases the heart.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 January 2017

kindness Nosheen Irfan how much lovely comments to poets do mean Thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 January 2017

THANK YOU DEAR POET FOR NOT DYING

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