I know i was wrong
And i also mean it
.......forgive me........
What i did was wrong,
But no one can always be right
........forgive me.......
True - the past is done
It's giving me a new lesson everyday
...Don't be sad...
i know i was wronge
sorry sweety....
....forgive me plz...
Forgiveness is in your nature
I don't want you to cry anymore
I love you my sugar cane
.......So plz forgive me......
for you Ben thanks for correcting
You show great heart, and also an uncontrolled blackness in you...it is good when a poet instills an emotion inside of me, so go forth feeling that fullfillment. If nothing else you have spoken to me....
My sugar cane, so sweet and thses days its the season. Simple lines coming from heart that has already forgiven. Why shall someone not forgive, be it God.10
Its like a personal letter to a friend. Its not poetic. All expressions are not poetry. Thanks for sharing your feeling with us.
my sugar cane! wonderful expression, Sumaira...so sweet...no matter your friend won't deny you forgiveness...nice write emotionally expressive...10
A worthy plea. Your sincerity is most evident. Even though we love there is no guarantee that we will not offend or hurt. So asking forgivenss and being forgiven must go together if love is to grow.
Very nice poem. Contrition is evident is a sincere manner. Thank you. Jim
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice plea. liked the sugar cane.