O' My Love Poem by sumaira ...

O' My Love

Rating: 4.7


Wall of haste, wall of shadows
Who's my life? Iam living for

Who's my present? who's my future?
Who's that man? I'll love in future

Hazel eyes, brownish glow
Lovely tone with sweetish flow

Man of strenght, man of charm
Man with strongest arms

I want to sing a lovely song
For my cutest prince that I am searching for

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

A very beautiful poetic prayer longing for someone true love...crafted with fine repeatition of words like wall of, who's my....10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 11 February 2009

good poem on love and hopes...shows the sweet inside of a longing expecting heart...10

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XOR 9 11 February 2009

Nice..simple and clean! well thought...sends a positive message... keep writing

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Joseph Poewhit 12 February 2009

Like every female looking for a male

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Tom Golding 12 February 2009

What every young woman wishes for. Expressed poeticly. Tom

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Kesav Easwaran 28 December 2019

Hope you have found him by now. Hope expectations positivity. Nice write

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Sumaira. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

Lovely tone with sweetish flow Rachel Ann Butler

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Indira Babbellapati 24 March 2009

hope u found one! hey, there's some urgent beat to the verses, i say!

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Catrina Heart 18 March 2009

the prince charming is wanted for the heart of the author, , , , , , lovely 10

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