Poems, Poetry Poem by DM W

Poems, Poetry

Rating: 5.0


Poems should sparkle
Like small lights in darkened rooms.
Poetry should be
Natural, like pebbles washed
By the surging waves.
Weathered objects seem to be
Much more appealing,
Than fake, airbrushed perfections.

Saturday, August 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 22 August 2020

Well said Dominic. I love the comparisons you've poetically made and a great and most apt last two closing lines. A honest full score for sharing your honest poetry insight. Thank you for writing the way it should be and should forever remain and I wish you well.

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Michael Hopkins 15 August 2020

Beautifully expressed poem Dominic. Certainly of the light in a dark room variety of poetry..

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