Poet: (December,2020) Poem by DM W

Poet: (December,2020)

Rating: 5.0


A verdant green Eden flows through the poet's veins,
As he seeks to transcend life's elaborate games.
He is one with the flesh and blood of the seasons.
He is one with the vital force of Creation.
He can create wondrous, dream - like worlds in mere days.
He can capture moonlight and the sun's golden rays.
He knows the icy solitude of distant stars
In the night. Yet he is aware that the beauty
They possess is rare. He watches things from afar
Like a strange, new god. He observes life move slowly
In its patterned processions from the stage's wings
He sees all of its scenes constantly replaying.
A verdant green Eden flows through the poet's veins,
As he seeks to transcend life's elaborate games.

Tuesday, December 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: artistic work,creation,poet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 09 December 2020

Elegantly well written and a pleasure to read a standalone poem. Uniquely expressed with well rounded and chosen words of poetry description for any fortunate reader to revel in. Five poetic stars Dominic and thank you for writing and sharing your more than gifted poetry for one and all. A delight. Take care and keep writing, for I and hopefully many more keep will keep reading.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 December 2020

A well crafted poem.... Truly excellent......5 stars*****

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Dominic Windram 10 December 2020

Thanks guys much appreciated. It was very much influenced by Dylan Thomas' The Force That Through The Green Fuse...' possibly my favourite poem by any poet.

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