Poetry is not
About perfection but
About expression.
A language is
Using a correct method
For expression.
A linguist strives
For perfection in method
Of expression.
Just like mind is
To work with reason
And heart with love
To heart
Connects the poetry
And mind to language.
In that unity
Lies the harmony for
Mind, body and soul.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Is line 13 the way you mean it to be? I wonder if there may be a typo? I have no heart. My mind is small. I understand, not at All! : ( Bri :)
Thanks Bri for reading. I think the line 13 is exactly what I meant unless you coul elaborate on your suggestion. You have sharper eyes and brain for edit than I. Here is my senryu to your four lines my mind is large I understand it all but I have no heart' Of course that would be a robot not Bri.