Political Puzzlement Poem by Paul Butters

Political Puzzlement



I was a Communist kid back in the fifties
And a seventeen-year old Socialist.
The Americans made me laugh even then:
Afraid of 'Commies'
When they really meant Soviets.

For me Socialism meant
Equal Shares
And humanitarian Christianity,
With the fall-back of a Welfare State.
All Good.

But as I've got older I've come to appreciate
The other side of the coin.
Not Fascism as such,
But with Socialism
Where is Aspiration?
Where is the Incentive to do more
And better?

We don't want a society of clones,
Sitting on their backsides
Living on the dole.

But then again, what should we aspire to?
Should I have aimed to be a mega-rich dictator
Of some parasitic world empire?

I'm all for developing talent to the full,
Encouraging people to make a positive contribution
To the wellbeing of all.

And there's the rub.
There doesn't seem to be a political system - yet,
That is just and fair
Whilst helping us all to blossom.

Until we invent something better,
A bubbling cauldron of Socialism and Free Enterprise
Is the best we have to work with.
Unless you know better.

Sunday, July 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: political utopia,politics
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 02 July 2017

Paul, I like the last line. My problem is there doesn't seem to be much reason for writing this as a poem, that is, organizing it by line and stanza. The language isn't intense enough or imagistic enough to benefit from form. Words like wellbeing, system, talent, positive, etc. are so abstract, the poem simply tells without engaging the reader. You might benefit from reading some good contemporary poetry like Philip Levine's, which is plain but employs intensely figures of speech. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it, and, if you do, perhaps share it with interested friends. Thanks! Yrs, JC

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Paul Butters 03 July 2017

MMM - I have a friend who dislikes poetry and I keep telling him, But not all my poems ARE poetry! Maybe he might read This one lol. (But will he read Anything? ? ?) . I class poems like this as Ideas Poems as I don't go for being lyrical or anything when typing them. Writing in free verse just suits me in my elderly laziness. Will check out Philip Levine though for pointers, plus of course your website.

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