Our galaxy dies,
A splash of water,
Sparkling in the sunlight on a tarmac sky,
Gently exploding with glittering streamers,
To settle,
Dying,
With my child-like cry.
This is because of our negative works on earth. Nice work.
very beautiful. Im assuming your actually talking about a break-up or love lost...i like how you equated it to the explosion a galaxy. really nice write man
This really moved me, You show a beautiful gift that I hope is not so rare, that others cannot access it, , , , WELL DONE , , EXCELLENT Love duncan X
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks folks. I literally watched water droplets fall...and my imagination took it from there.....