As I ponder life without
you
I cannot comprehend
the picture.
Without you, tomorrow
would not exist.
A shard forever lost
wandering the streets
of life
forever alone.
Excellent poem. All the meaning expressed in a well written short. Thanks. The flow was great and the meaning felt.
I cannot comprehend the picture. Without you, tomorrow would not exist.- - - -there is such unbelievable pain in this poem that it is frightening to think we shall feel these things as we lose our loved ones
Sometimes a shard breaks away from us and the loss is irreparable pushing us to despondency. But let me here hope that every cloud has its silver lining. Thanks for sharing it on PH.
Thank you again Heather.... I would be more than happy to send you a souvenir Australian pen, even 2 so you can add the other wonderful words you have written. x
You've captured how so many people must feel when they lose a close companion. It would be lovely to hear of the shard noticing light reflecting off a similarly lonely shard, and each looking through the other to once again take pleasure in seeing the world.
Pretty thoughts of a great poet are expressed in poetry. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautifully written....................................