! Portraits After Death; Rhyme After Time Poem by Michael Shepherd

! Portraits After Death; Rhyme After Time

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and a poet I was reading yesterday
said, have you noticed
that portraits of people change
after they die?

and I’ve noticed that portraits
of Princess Diana
now look to me as if
she’s a sad schemer

I don’t like this at all.
I feel dirty, as if
I’d been manipulated
when all I want to do
is, to see the goodness and the beauty in her

It’s the same with rhyme:
when I see rhyme
(hearing it doesn’t worry me so much,
as if the time of reading it
heals it in some way) -

it seems like sad scheming
as when Robert Frost
has to take the road pre-planned
by language and the rhyming dictionary
and very obviously rhymes
future with suture

I don’t like this at all, either:
It never used to worry me; now
I start to look cynically
at every poem that rhymes
in the convention of its times
(that rhyme was not planned
deliberately..) –
look cynically, to see
which was the chosen word,
the direction of the poet’s thought;
and which the ‘fill-in’, like
some silly puzzle; even if
it stimulates the poet’s imagination
perhaps

I don’t like either of these phenomena
in actuality, or worse, in myself;
both these dirty me to myself.
This looks like being hard work
for the insulted mind
insulted, like some robot, by itself.

Diana, Robert, I am deeply, deeply regretful.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 11 January 2007

To be fair, I think you may have to apply that same cynicism to the non-rhyming variety. For the rhyming poet, they may actually enjoy the ride more than the finished article. The initial intent may twist and veer and as such, to you, seem inferior. But bear in mind, the poet at the time wasn't writing to your criteria. Danny.; ¬)

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