Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Pour Me Drunkenness - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Your dark-gray sky
Hasn't got enough rain
To drench this thirsty soul.
So, pour me divine drunkenness
That can make my heart overflow
Through a somnolence of surrealism.
And I'll close my drooping eyes peacefully
On the soft grass blades of greenish coziness
Forgetting the turmoil of your abandoned earth.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Pour Me Drunkenness by Sanjukta Nag

  • Anil Kumar Panda (9/15/2015 8:11:00 AM)

    'And I'll close my drooping eyes peacefully, on the soft grass blades of greenish coziness' is great imagery. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/15/2015 3:12:00 AM)

    To drench this thirsty soul with the muse of life. Nice piece. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 10:49:00 AM)

    Imagery - at its best
    Flow - Flawless
    Message - Strong
    Feel - heartfelt
    Love- immortal
    Rating- infinite....................
    Artistic work, loved it.
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  • (9/14/2015 10:15:00 AM)

    A powerful poem with carefully chosen words to express true feeling, great write, Stay blessed and keep writing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 14, 2015

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