Sandy gathered strength
from rivers and seas
flooding homes, fields,
markets and subways.
Sandy made a pact
with the strongest winds
knocking down trees,
buildings and other
man-made creations.
Sandy declared her power
over technological inventions
sending houses and streets
into days and nights
of darkness and cold.
Powerful Sandy
has just declared
her invincible power
over powerful humans!
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October 30,2012
well structured poem with the thought striking. Its a real deep thought and being happy is the literal meed of any being. Great.my vote is 10.Congrats.
It is only raining and blowing here not like the super power of Sandy in USA Thank you very much for responding, dear Joseph.
I hope you were not in it's direction. Is mother nature telling us something? You told of this tragedy in a stark and direct way.Well done-a needed reminder of what is beyond our control
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Powerful Write! We, here in New York City and New Jersey have felt the tremendous impact of this mean Sandy! Your well crafted and thought provoking write is a clear description of the devastation left behind by this mean Sandy! 10+++ Thanks for sharing and keep it up! I hope you have a chance and read the two poems about Sandy that I posted: Storming Moments and New York it Shaking God Bless You! Romeo-New York City