Practice #1 Poem by Bryony Sheldon

Practice #1

Rating: 5.0


I guess it's just a game
And I don't know when to stop
And I didn't mean to change-
I didn't know I could

And maybe it's alright
And this is just another dream
For I feel that when I'm wide awake
No one hears me scream

I try my best to stay away
It just doesn't make much sense-
That I feel I'm only lonely
When I'm with my friends

Is it too late to start over?
Or would it be better if I left?
Cos I know I never tried enough
But I swear I tried my best

Thursday, June 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,lost
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I've used the last two lines in two other poems hahaha
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 04 June 2020

Life and happiness is just a game.The eternal game and we all participate, we all play it, we all pretend and we all cheat. Perfect days are few and far between but there are more good than bad, just like people. A great emotions bared poem Bryony.10++. And take it one day at a time.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 June 2020

game! what is.... maybe present life where lost is fact of daily where depression cannot do anything but the stay away practice is continue phrase there is

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