Praise To The Church Fasts Poem by Liza Sud

Praise To The Church Fasts

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A snake is used to renewing her skin,
And she is crawling out it - to the core.
And something similar happens to me
in any of the fasts imposed by Church.

My aspiration coincides woth dates,
(who spits on church - that will not understand)
and maybe demons try to test and tempt
under strict supervision of the gods.

But on a festive day, the peace of mind
That I attain I even can't convey.
Like a new birth from a pure layer or ply,
where in God I feel that I love myself!

And after violent feelings - total calm,
(who did not know about it - go taste!)
I know all the fast dates, Mother of God,
and for God I do not have enough praise!

Thursday, August 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: health,religious
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2019

A religious poem is so hauntingly delineated with an interesting beginning. I love the following lines very much. But on a festive day, the peace of mind That I attain I even can't convey. Like a new birth from a pure layer or ply, where in God I feel that I love myself! Nice work.10

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Julia Luber 29 August 2019

Celebrating ritual with passionate respect for the organization and structure behind it.

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