When I leave you and your sacred dwelling;
often without a thought of Prayer,
but a grief-stricken sigh
is raised to You.
You know my longings are
all for you alone.
you are aware of the
ups and downs of my, life,
because You are interior
to my innermost, Lord.
When the walks of many seers are atop
I tread on vallies.
I am your prankful child, O Lord.
When your memories fade away in me
and i am far away
from your Ways.
I am no way out of your Love, yout Heart.
Leave You and your sacred dwelling
with a conscious Prayer:
Forget me not YOUR prankful Child.
I am your own and You are mein.
Most beautiful devotional, I am touched by your words so true, the picture you added is phenomenal. Happiest to have met your name now.
Well articulated and nicely penned with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Freni.
Revisiting this loveliest poem gives me an uplifting feel. Marvelous poem, dear Freni. The picture you added here is adorable.
You know my longings are all for you alone. you are aware of the ups and downs of my, life, because You are interior to my innermost, Lord. i am so happy to read this dear Frenny, that you have become the prankful boy of the Lord Jesus.. you are filled with spiritual and mystical thoughts as your life is....... thank you dear Frenny for guding the reader to God through your lovely conversation with God. tony
I am in love with the picture you add here, so good to discover this great Love called JESUS, Thank you for your lovely PRAYER, dearest Freni. God loves you!
2) This is a gem, dearest Freni, a gem straight from your heart! I have come once again to read this and please keep creating devotional poems, you are so perfect in this, the metaphors you used, in your other poems too, are amazing! ! A 10 Full Score for again another Beauty. God's Blessings be greatest.Beautiful Prayer. ToMyPoemList
I am no way out of your Love, your Heart. Leave You and your sacred dwelling with a conscious Prayer: Forget me not YOUR prankful Child. I am your own and You are mine.............................Such a greatest Beauty I feel in my heart and soul.
Dearest Sylvia, I am so happy, that my humble lines could attract you and give you little happiness in reading them. thank you very much. your word inspires me to write devotional poems...grateful to you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
and i am far away from your Ways. Beautiful word and expressions. Yes, you are so clos to God
Thanks Anisha..